A short poem I wrote for my special someone

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Amy Santos
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A short poem I wrote for my special someone

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It's not my best work, but at least it's my most sincere.



Her eyes outshine the brightest stars
Turning night time into day
She's the fire the lights the darkness
When my world is dark and gray

Her smile is like the sunshine
Shining brightly in the rain
Her love is like the ocean
Flowing through my heart and veins

Her scent is like an orchard
Filled with roses in the spring
Her voice is like the angels
And the cherubs when they sing

Her heart is like a diamond
So precious and so pure
The portrait of perfection
Pales in comparison to her
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Post by SilverLady(SO) »

Hi, Amy -

That is an absolutely beautiful poem!

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Post by Leeza »

Amy, I loved the poem.

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