Beauty

Jassmine(SO) · Post by **Jassmine(SO)** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 5:04 am

I stand upon a mountain top
A gentle breeze runs it's fingers
through my hair
I gaze down
Into the emerald green valley below
Flowers of every color
Run wild
Playing hide and seek
Amongst the grass
Sunlight dances upon the water
In a lake deep crystal blue
Primeval trees stand
Strong and silent
Their branches reach upwards
Hoping to touch the azure sky
I stand and gaze
My soul wrapped in peace

CJ · Post by CJ » Thu Jul 29, 2004 6:07 am

You wrapped my soul in peace, too, Jassmine. Thanks.

You write very well.

Love,
CJ

Virginia · Post by **Virginia** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:47 am

Hi Jassmine,
Thanks, you wrapped my day in beauty too!
Love,
Deborah

Ahzz · Post by **Ahzz** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 12:56 pm

*lick* mmmm luv ya babe.

Lorna · Post by **Lorna** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 1:02 pm

What a beautiful poem...

SophieLawson · Post by **SophieLawson** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 1:45 pm

wowww... I can really picture this poem in my head, lovly poem!

Sophie xx

Jassmine(SO) · Post by **Jassmine(SO)** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:24 pm

Thanks everyone

I am glad you liked it

Oh, Ahzz

Love ya, too

*Hugs*

Virginia · Post by **Virginia** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:50 pm

Jassmine/Ahzz - you two are gonna have to get a room!!

Deborah

Ahzz · Post by **Ahzz** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 10:41 pm

why? We have this one and several others on this site to play in.

Marda · Post by **Marda** » Thu Jul 29, 2004 11:32 pm

Hi Jassmine
Beauty*Ful
I Popsicle You

Love / Marda

Jassmine(SO) · Post by **Jassmine(SO)** » Fri Jul 30, 2004 9:53 am

Hey Hey Marda,

Thank you

*Hugs*

Rebecca · Post by **Rebecca** » Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:31 pm

Hi Jassmine,

I haven't been down here recently and have been missing some soul healing stuff.
A georgous piece of writing, ~D~ described it as picture poetry.
We could do with a little holiday there right now,

Love
Rebecca xxx

Jassmine(SO) · Post by **Jassmine(SO)** » Mon Aug 02, 2004 9:59 am

Hey Rebecca and ~D~

Thank you both

*Hugs & Love*

Beauty · Post by **Beauty** » Wed Aug 04, 2004 7:45 am

Hi Jassmine,

I don't come in here much.

I originally thought that was from me until I read the first line.

That is a GREAT poem. Add me to the list of those who loved it.

Beauty

Jassmine(SO) · Post by **Jassmine(SO)** » Wed Aug 04, 2004 11:53 am

Hi Beauty

So glad you liked it

Thank you

*Hugs & Love*